by Tracy Weber
It’s time to admit it. I suffer from OCPD—Obsessive Compulsive Planning Disorder. I hadn’t even finished writing my first book, Murder Strikes a Pose when I started preparing to query agents. I took classes, read dozens of blog articles, and attended a host of information sessions. In the end, I left with two key takeaways:
1. Check your spelling. Agents will toss your manuscript in the garbage if you spell their name wrong.
2. Your manuscript must have a fabulous first line—a single sentence that will hook the reader in twenty words or less.
Writing my book’s first line became an obsession. I sweated and angsted and wrote and rewrote. I finally created something perfect: a pithy first sentence that would simultaneously hook the reader, draw them into the story, and introduce them to the voice of the novel’s protagonist.
But all of that angst and hard work will be for nothing if readers never crack open the book. That’s where the cover comes in.
The design of my book’s cover started with my author website. My webmaster (aka husband) and I discussed the site’s design for months. I wanted it to illustrate some key elements of my mysteries; he wanted a professional-looking page that wouldn’t take him a hundred years to create. We finally agreed that the site would contain:
· Bright, happy colors that captured the lighthearted tone of the work
· An illustration that quickly showed two important components of the series: yoga and dogs
· Recognizable landmarks of Seattle, the city in which the series takes place
· A feeling of playful mischief between the two main characters: Kate, a quirky yoga instructor, and Bella, her horse-sized German shepherd.
That decided, my husband hired artist Nicole Alesi who developed this web banner.
I was simply delighted. The web banner contained everything that I wanted and more.
My publisher agreed. When Midnight Ink purchased the first three books in the series, they hired Nicole to design the book covers. The cover art she created for Murder Strikes a Pose is below:
I have to admit, I love it.
So imagine my surprise when I read my first one-star review. The reviewer said that my writing was “lovely; fast paced and vivid,” and that mystery readers would like the book. So why did she give it a single star? In spite of the word “murder” in the title, she thought that the book was a romance, not a mystery. Evidently, she doesn’t like reading about murder.
The second surprise came a few weeks later at my first book signing. Several people paused at my table, glanced at the cartoon cover, shrugged, and walked away saying, “Oh, it’s a kid’s book.”
So much for that all-important first line.
I still adore my covers, as do most of my readers. I know many people have started the book specifically because they were drawn in by its bright, happy design. The covers of the rest of my series are substantively similar: Same light, bright cartoon characters; same illustration of the setting in the background; same sense of mischief and play between the two main characters.
But now we include crime elements. In my newest book, A Fatal Twist, it’s the outline of a body. Hopefully it's large enough for people to notice.
What makes you decide to read a book? Cover? Title? First line? Please share your thoughts below.
Tracy Weber
All four books in the Downward Dog Mystery Series are available at booksellers everywhere!
Tracy Weber
All four books in the Downward Dog Mystery Series are available at booksellers everywhere!
Tracy Weber is a certified yoga teacher and the founder of Whole Life Yoga, an award-winning yoga studio in Seattle, where she currently lives with her husband, Marc, and precocious German shepherd puppy, Ana. She loves sharing her passion for yoga and animals in any form possible. When she’s not writing, she spends her time teaching yoga, trying to corral Ana Tasha, and sipping Blackthorn cider at her favorite ale house. Tracy loves connecting with fans. Find her on her author web pageor on Facebook.